03/09/2020
MESSAGE FROM “THE IRREDEEMABLE DEEMING GUY”
Following below is the first review of my novel. Actually it’s not so much a review as it is an evaluation by my hybrid publisher, FriesenPress (“FP”), to ascertain its validity for publication. I chose the self publishing route over the traditional publishing route as the folks at FP treated me like family. I would like to drill down on my publishing experiences in future posts. These would include Manuscript Preparation, Editing, Revisions, Designs of Covers, Production, Book Formatting, Print Distribution and Promotion. So if you think that is worthwhile, and possibly helpful to aspiring writers, please let me know.
Summary: Playing with Players is the fictional memoir of Alice, a single mother and former es**rt now studying accounting and tax law, who recounts her relationship with Jack, a tax auditor. Throughout this narrative, we learn of Jack’s childhood, his adventures with tax auditing, his relationships and s*xual encounters with various women, which all culminate in his murder on the autumnal equinox. Along the way, the author interweaves portions of Canadian tax law and significant court decisions, introducing the reader to their intricacies and significance, though often taken for granted and not interrogated further. This book will be enjoyed by anyone with a career in accounting or tax enforcement as well as a general adult audience with an interest in the subject of tax law.
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Opening Comments: Dear Chris, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to FriesenPress for editorial review. You bring such a wealth of knowledge about the intricacies of tax law to this story. I’m sure your fellow auditors and accountants will enjoy reading it, and—since it’s presented in the context of an accessible narrative—so will a more general audience. What follows is my editorial evaluation of the manuscript, detailing some of its strengths and potential areas of improvement, as well as my editorial recommendation for next steps. Strengths: As I’ve mentioned already, your knowledge of tax law and auditing (and even, impressively, comparative tax law between Canada and the United States) shines brightly throughout this story. It’s a fantastic opportunity to make tax law accessible and comprehensible to the layperson. I was also particularly intrigued by the frame narrative structure you used, in which Bob, the tax law professor the reader is introduced to at the beginning, reads Alice’s memoirs about her relationship with Jack, which are reproduced and make up the bulk of the text. I thought it was a bit reminiscent of the “found manuscript” trope prevalent in a lot of gothic fiction, so you’re in great company! Finally, I can’t think of anything more original than detecting Miltonian undertones in the world of tax auditing—bravo!
OK so I left out some of the book’s shortcomings only because I think I rectified them in the revision process. But if you want to read those as well, feel free to ask.
The novel should be available in May.
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