06/22/2025
When we're working with animals, how we describe their behavior makes a huge difference. Using objective language in our behavior notes is vital because it creates a clear, unbiased picture of a dog's personality and needs. This isn't just about sounding professional; it's about setting animals up for success in their new homes.
Why Objectivity Matters
Imagine you're reading a dog's profile. Which description is more helpful?
* Subjective Example: "Buddy is a very sweet dog who loves people, but he can be a little nervous."
* Objective Example: "When approached by unfamiliar people, Buddy's tail tucks and he moves to the back of his kennel. During leash walks, he solicits attention from passersby by nudging their hands with his nose."
The subjective example is well-intentioned, but it leaves a lot to interpretation. "Very sweet" and "a little nervous" are vague. The objective example, however, describes specific actions. This detailed information is incredibly valuable for several reasons:
* Informed Adoptions: Potential adopters can read these notes and gain a realistic understanding of what to expect. This leads to better-matched placements and reduces the likelihood of a dog being returned because their behavior wasn't what the family anticipated.
* Targeted Care and Training: For shelter staff and volunteers, objective notes help in developing appropriate enrichment and training plans. If we know a dog consistently paces and whines when alone, we can implement strategies to reduce separation anxiety. If a dog always greets other dogs with a loose, wagging tail, we know they're likely good candidates for playgroups.
* Consistency Across Teams: When everyone uses objective language, there's less room for miscommunication. A new volunteer or foster can read the notes and have a consistent understanding of a dog's behavior, ensuring continuity of care.
Here are a few more ways to transform subjective observations into objective descriptions:
“She's aggressive with other dogs." Change it to:
“Upon seeing another dog, Luna stiffens, her hackles raise, and she emits a low growl. She attempts to lunge towards the other dog."
“He's very shy." Change it to:
“When a hand is extended, Max lowers his head and avoids eye contact. He does not approach unfamiliar people, remaining at the back of his kennel unless offered a treat, which he takes gently."
“This dog loves to play." Change it to:
“During play sessions with toys, Penny engages in tug-of-war, shakes toys vigorously, and brings them back to handlers. She initiates play bows with other dogs."
Share this with a rescue or shelter volunteer, staff member or foster!
Pictured is Luffy, available thru Philly Rescue Angels INC! What objective words would you use to describe her in this photo?
